My hubby has the day off, which means I can dedicate some serious time to this final edit while he plays with our little guy.
It appears I have a tiny problem with tenses, i.e going from “the triathlete” to “their” within the same sentence.
I’ve spent most of the afternoon cleaning everything up – first changing all of the wording to he/she and finally deciding it reads better with you/your. I believe the drills and workout terminology read much better now… but things got much worse before they got better.
I love seeing comments like this one:
Break is over, time to get back to work!